Sunday, 4 December 2016

Advertise

2 comments:

  1. I think I did well on advertising a golden retriever but I need to improve on making my adjectives a bit more interesting.

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  2. I agree Siya. Someone of your skill in writing can add a lot more detail and interest to your poem. Perhaps think about writing this advertisement as a piece of persuasive writing, rather than a poem. Advertisements are trying to get you to do something after all, which is buy a product.

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