I am a Year 5 student at Halsey Drive School. I hope you enjoy looking at my blog.
I like the image you chose to include in your transactional text. I wonder whether you may consider the order your paragraphs are in, because your opening paragraph is on the far right of the page you end up reading this last. You may like to consider some different sentence beginnings too, rather than a lot of "according to.."
I like the way you put #SAVE THE BLOBFISH! Try putting more information to make it even cooler!
I will think about that next time Alina.