Monday, 10 April 2017

Moment in time version 2

Moment in time

I’m so scared,we were at Rotorua park and were  going parasailing with my friends family.They first made us wear life jackets then a harness ,which didn’t even fit me ,like so unfair but whatever.Then Will(The person that was taking us)said”That the other part of the sea smelt like dad’s farts and that  we were ready to go in the air.They first clipped us on and then we were ready,they were telling me to hold the straps next to me but I couldn’t hear them because we were too far away.My dad then told me to hold on to the  straps,it was so much fun ,we were gliding through the air but unfortunately time had run out we had to get back into the boat,Will said before we went to the boat “If we don’t have fun then we could call him Tony”.......... So looks like his name is still Will.

                                                                                                            My dad almost gave me a heart attack,when we went back to the dock he said”Let’s take some photos in these clothes”,I thought he had gone cray cray but no ,he wanted to take photos in these ridiculous clothes like who does that .I said”no way”but guess what he said”You have to” I said”Fine”.So I took a few photos and then went off to play with my friend.We then played with Namya (My friend’s sister)BTW my friends name is Rudra but I call him Pudra. It’s now time to go on the jet boat.I knew it was going to be a blast,I just hope no one falls out while we're doing a 360 degree turn.        

     

  • What was the learning intention of this lesson?W.A.L.T:edit and re- craft our work.

  • What new learning can I celebrate?I can celebrate that I can use good descriptive language like the other part of the sea smells like dads farts.
  • What did I find tricky?I found it tricky to think of an ending because I didn't know how to end in a satisfying way.

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