Wednesday, 26 July 2017

Waikowhai and Halsey Drive Writing




I worked with Nisha from Waikowhai Intermediate on a shared piece of writing.My writing is highlighted in blue





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Walking across the misty beach, I suddenly found a perfect shell for my collection. I gazed into the beautiful sunset and then looked down at the glassy water. My reflection looked back at me and I smiled. The sky is ablaze with colour, fiery orange and majestic pink. The waves crash against my feet as I walk across the sand bare footed. I let my feet lead the way to the place I love. I climb up the rocks and hoist myself on top of the cliffs. As I reached the top, I could feel a cold breeze forcing me to follow its way.As the moon starts to rise the first star appears so I make a wish, ”Starlight starbright, first star I see tonight I wish I may, I wish I might have the first wish I wish tonight”. I make my wish in my head and slither down the rocks. Everything felt like a dream, seeing a perfect misty beach. What should I do I thought? Stay, the only thing that popped up in my mind was to stay.

1 comment:

  1. Great writing Siya loved the sentence "I gazed into the beautiful sunset and then looked down at the glassy water".you could next time add on more about the bridge in the background then just the water. Fantastic work done.

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