Tuesday, 25 July 2017

Walking to school

                           Walking to school:

I stumbled as I looked  behind and saw my best friends
struggling to keep up. It was the first day of school and me and

my best friends were walking through the cold crunchy ice trying to get to school on time. I felt a shiver down my spine as the icy water splashed all over me. Life in Greenland was like being put inside a freezer then put outside in the pouring rain without a jacket and finally eating 10 buckets of ice cream. Brrr,that’s cold and to make matters worse it looked like there was going to be a snow storm.I braced myself as the journey was going to take a lot more time than I thought it would.Shivering and freezing we kept on walking and walking and walking until we finally got there.

1 comment:

  1. You tried to create a humorous image here Siya but do you think this suits the message the image portrayed. When writing it is important to match your style to the type of writing we are doing e.g. descriptive rather than narrative.