I am a Year 5 student at Halsey Drive School. I hope you enjoy looking at my blog.
Thank you for your presentation today ladies. Here's some feedback for you: I was impressed with the use of scientific language and your compare and contrast map. I would like to suggest that you may like to have written a summary statement to support your map. Your recipe and slime turned out to be very popular and very on trend. I wonder if you could have even sold some?
Great job girls I really like how you didn't get caught up in the fun part and put in the information. Maybe you could of double check your writing.